WALT: persuade a reader to agree with the writer’s point of view through the presentation of relevant points and supporting evidence.
Success Criteria - being able to: ✓
Write an introduction that clearly states my point of view on the topic.
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Present one key point/reason in each paragraph (3 paragraphs) that is introduced in the topic sentence.
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Make sure that each reason is supported by evidence and examples.
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Organise the points in a logical order, beginning with the most important.
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Use persuasive language features (repetition, conjunctions, emotive language, pronouns, imperatives)
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Write a conclusion that summarises the main points made in my argument.
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Accurately use spelling, punctuation and grammar
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good morning room 4
Imagine if we don't eat the right foods ,
our bodies will weaken and won't stay strong,healthy and fit, and we will become couch potatoes.
We all have to eat vegetables and meat, so our bodies stay healthy and we won't get bad health problems.But unhealthy eating habits, can affect our vitamin intake,making our bodies prone to bad health problems like diabetes,high blood pressure and heart disease.
Sugar is really bad for our bodies in large amounts,we need to eat food with low sugar levels,so our bodies burn it off quickly.Junk food,also is bad,we can have a little bit of it, but to much can make you unhealthy.
Healthy food has a lot of vitamin c and of course, that is really good for our bodies,it helps other vitamins to be absorbed which our bodies needs, to grow fit and strong, for example mandarins,apples, and vegetables.
Children and adults are getting lazy because they sit around on their IPads,computers and phones.So go outside and play with your family, don't stay inside on the computer ,have fun outside.
Soon there will be robots that will do our homework and even our chores in the future ,don't let robots or other people do it for you, do it yourself,! DON'T be lazy.Be fit and strong,
Being fit is a way of saying a person eats well,gets a lot of physical activity,and has a healthy weight.If you're fit,your body works well,feels good,and can do all the things you want to do, like run around with your friends,and family
Thank you for listening to my speech and think about eating healthy,and being physical starting now!!!!!we need to eat healthy to stay strong!!!!
DON'T BE A COUCH POTATO!!!!
Something I'm proud of is finishing my speech and asking people if i need help.
Something I have to work on is finishing righting quicker and to focus on what I'm working on.
